lunes, noviembre 23, 2009

Luis Arce/Un poema

Correspondencia de metamorfa

Aquí

torbellino diáfano,

el cuerpo profundo

que se mira tormenta,

quitado de su olvido

cruje,

esquila,

se enciende en el músculo

como desnudez;

espera llegar su retrato

mis ojos.

Aquí,

con la piel en presente,

me arrojo al viento ajeno;

caigo mundo entero,

altas tempestades levanto.

Por Luis Ace. Estudia Letras Hispánicas en la UNAM.

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¿Porqué hicieron ésto? En serio, el orgullo desmedido por sus pequeños logros y ese sentimiento de que el otro les está "comiendo el mandado" es sólo un reflejo del despróposito y vacío del que ni la poesía nos puede rescatar; esas envidias y competencias son inútiles hasta la obscenidad. Lo mismo va para la apatía y conformismo que con cinismo arrastran otros por todos lados y en todo lo que simulan hacer (pues parece por momentos que ni siquiera tienen la voluntad de darle cierto orden a su vida, aunque ese ya no es mi asunto).

A todos los estimo y quiero de alguna manera, pero hay algunos (no es el lugar para decir quienes, ni siquiera cuántos, pues ellos lo saben muy bien y no son todos, de hecho son la minoría) que considero mis mejores amigos y que aún si nos dedicaramos a algo totalmente distinto así sería. También siento que me hace falta decir que que las groserías y abusos (o falta) de confianza hacia esas personas y los malentendidos que se han propiciado por los mismos me ofenden tanto como si me los hubieran hecho a mí mismo. Me confunden todas estas situaciones, pues a todos los estimo y me cuesta trabajo seguirme llevando bien con todos sin sentirme hipócrita por momentos. Reconozco que también yo he cometido muchos errores que afectaron a devra en su momento(como todos). Mi intención no es señalar, cada quién sabe que saco ponerse y al final nadie es más o menos culpable que los demás.

Lo peor es que parece que con el paso del tiempo hay quienes sólo parecen generar rencor en lugar de buscar al menos mantener una coexistencia pacífica (tengan en cuenta que nos vamos a seguir topando, aunque tal vez no sea tan seguído, toda la vida).

Ya saben "ex-devras", el texto es abierto, todos tienen mi número, ya saben los correos a los que me pueden responder o, si les parece más sano, pueden dejar aquí un poco de sinceridad en lugar de basura o bromas de mal gusto. No se trata de atacar, se trata de decir lo que no nos gusta sin ánimo de buscar mayores fricciones sino sanarlas. En serio, chavos, nos hace falta sinceridad; yo creo que por eso todo se nos fue al carajo. Se me hace injusto que por caprichos, actitudes estúpidas y, en especial, egos inútiles se pierdan tantos poryectos y tantas amistades.

Saludos,
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Daniel Malpica dijo...

Aacabo de darme una vuelta después de tanto y encontré el comentario de Eliud. Sabes, tienes toda la razón y también mi amistad está abierta, así ese algo me rebase y sólo pueda, aunque sea, escucharte. Y es que es bien cabrón Eliud, pues a veces uno actua, uno suelta toda su mierda y no nos damos cuenta de que en realidad nos estamos hablando a nosostros mismos, o sí lo hacemos y más bien no nos queremos dar cuenta. Desafortunadamente el siliencio otorga Eliud, e inclusive, vibra constantemente a las espaldas con intenciones evidentes.

Los puentes no se sostienen de un sólo lado y las personas son medios, no anclas. Lo único que puedo hacer es desearle lo mejor a cada uno de los devras, pues dentro de todo, bonitos recuerdos de personas (sí, le apuesto al ser persona más que al ser poeta) me reiteran una parte de lo que soy.
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y espero que nos veamos pronto

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Es una tristeza que Devrayativa ya no sea más, por otro lado, como bien dice Eliud, los recuerdos quedan y además, el espíritu 'devra' sigue produciendo en las semillas germinales de ese árbol prodigioso que dió hasta que le dolió, y más.

Un gran abrazo a todos en el colectivo, de uno de sus seguidores habituales de conexión a internet ocasional que les sigue leyendo y aprendiendo y admirando sin conocerles, en la medida de lo posible.

Agradecimientos y admiraciones especiales a Eduardo, quién en un dado momento fué gentil en invitarme a colaborar en este proyecto tan suyo de manera breve y del cual tuve un buen 'feedback'.

Seguiré visitando sus blogs individuales.

¡VIVA LA POESÍA!.

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